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 सँगै हासे तिमीसँग बोलेपछि दुखेँ
तिम्रो शहरमा रहर घोलेपछि दुखेँ

नछोएको नदेखेको नभोगेको कहिल्यै
अमुल्य यौवनको मोल मोलेपछि दुखेँ

चाहनाको लालीमा सूर्य फूल्दै थियो
चन्द्रमाको उज्यालोले पोलेपछि दुखेँ

पुगे नीलो समुन्द्र चुमे नीलै आकाश
तर झुठको दरबार खोलेपछि दुखेँ

भिन्न शरीर एकात्मा भोगाई आधा आधा
तिम्रो अहंकारले विथोलेपछि दुखेँ ।
                                                                      ओखलढुङ्गा हालः काठमाडौँ                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

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swagat said...

Sundar Gazal !!! Nice to feel it.But, the structure of gazal has to be redefined by this piece of creation.kehi maatraa haru milenan... milauda jhanai ramro hunchha ki...

Anonymous said...

अमुल्य यौवनको मोल मोलेपछि दुखेँ
k bhana ko yar kurai bujina ta

Saloja said...

Thanks sir. Thanks for ur suggssion

Saloja said...

@Anonymous hahahhaa gajal Prastha 6aina ra sir?

Anonymous said...

good very good

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